Casa Uno
And tomorrow, the day I go home,
a juxtaposition will lay down
into me like two opposing sides
splitting my body in two diff-
erent colors.
Aligning the poles of a Northern New York college student
and a Central-American, Costa Rican white blonde girl
that miss of moist warmth
the climate type and of familial
warmth
soft mothers’ skin and a head on
a father’s chest. A brother whose
tactless jokes cut
others deeply but show me that there is
someone honest left in this world.
3 comments:
Isa, I love this!! Especially the ending. I seriously love it, it's awesome.
I liked your poem it is good. I wanted to play with the rhythm
'Casa Uno
And tomorrow, the day I go home,
a juxtaposition
will lay down into me
like two opposing sides
splitting my body in two
different
colors.
Aligning the poles
of a Northern
New York college student
and a Central-American,
Costa Rican
white blonde girl'
...
and so I did. I like your version much better. It is good.
I love this a lot
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